摘要：You have been asked mend a particular brand of bread for use in elementary schools in a small city. Which of the four brands of bread described in the...
You have been asked to recommend a particular brand of bread for use in elementary schools in a small city. Which of the four brands of bread described in the chart would you recommend? Support your choice with information from the chart above.
一 规范: 一张表/四种吐司吐司面包/口感,营养成分成份和价格三项鉴定结果/说明五个鉴定级別的图例/小鎮市的中小型学
二 要求: 从报表中的四种吐司吐司面包中为该地的中小型学明显强烈推荐一种,根据报表中的信息内容內容说明缘故.
三 写作分析: 本题其实不是只传送报表中信息内容內容, 仅仅根据报表中信息内容內容谈本身的提议,因此,应写成探讨文.写作时,应考虑吐司吐司面包服食者揉吐司面包价格,营养成分成份,口感等因素.确立时可能会出現一定艰辛,因为四种吐司吐司面包都是有优势和缺陷,应根据服食者和本身的提议确立一种,接着说明本身的管理决策为最好选择.写时不必将报表中的信息内容內容逐一叙述,而应是本身的写作目的服务,有一定的选择.
To reecommend a bread from the four brands, we have to consider all the factors involved. If only the four factors in the chart are to be considered, it is not difficult to come to the conclusion that I should recommend Brand A. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, whoever is asked to recommend some food has to consider the characteristics of the users. In this case, the users will be mostly school children who need nutrition. So we must put emphasis on the nutritional ratings of the four brands of bread. Furthermore, we must be aware of the fact that children are not as rational as adults. They will not like a particular food simply because it is nutritious. Usually they choose food according to taste. Therefore we also have to consider the rating of taste of the food we are to recommend.
Nutritiously, the rating of Brand A is the same as Brand C, but higher than Brand B and Brand D. So the choice will be between A and C. But Brand C should be excluded because it is rated the lowest in the quality of taste. In terms of taste, Brand A is better than both Brands B and C, but not as good as Brand D, which is rated "Excellent". But, Brand D must be excluded because its nutritional rating is the lowest. So Brand A should be recommended when both nutrition and taste have to be ery good.
The remaining factor to be considered is whether the price of Brand A is good or not. it appears that this is a drawback because its pricee is the highest of the four, but I don't think it is a problem.No matter who is going to pay for the bread, the cost will not be much. First of all, children do not eat a lot of bread. Secondly, parents are usually willing to pay any price for the benefit of their children. Thirdly, if it is the schools that are going to pay for the bread, they are unlikely to sacrifice quality or taste for a small sum of money unless they have fiancial diffficulties. It is possible that the standard of living in the small city is so low that the parents nor the schools can aford the most expensive bread. But this is only speculation. Unless the conditions of the city prove to be very poor, I think I should recommend Brand A.
第三段: A 吐司吐司面包符合要求